08-05-2008, 06:00 AM
Punishment in the Gym written by Crazybelly (edited by Nerveexplosion)
Linda was a nice blonde girl, shoulder length hair, tiny stomach, sculpted abs and your average California girl. She left her boyfriend, John a professional boxer, for his best friend Dave because he was too jealous for her; or so she said.
For two weeks she didn't hear from the boy, when, suddenly, he called
her. "Come tomorrow in the gym at ten PM, I really need to talk to you." She decided on going ahead and meeting him but she didn't really like the idea of meeting him alone so late at night. To her their relationship was over, there was nothing to talk about.
She got to the gym around 9:45 PM, to find an old dirty boxing ring, in a gym that looked like it hadn't been used in years. Most of the lights were of so she walked to the far end of the gym and turned all the lights on so she could se more clearly. The place was empty.
Since her ex hadn't arrived yet she climbed through the ropes and started to launch fake jabs, dreaming of what it would be like to box for a living. She was dressed in a white, close-fitting shirt, and a short black mini. Her big breast
jumped with every blow. Suddenly, she heard a voice "You blonde bitch what do you think your doing?"
The ex-boyfriend had climbed into the ring while she was day dreaming, he stood at a corner of the ring with shorts and boxing-gloves on, ready for action.
He was a pretty big guy, tall and with big muscles. Linda saw him standing there and mocked, "isn't it a little late for a fight?" He laughed and replied "You don't understand bitch? The match is tonight and you're the main event."
Suddenly the girl understood, he was here to get revenge for what she had done, she tried to escape, ducking through the ropes but her grabbed her by the arm and pushed her to the center of the ring before she could get away.
She tried to say something but just as she opened her mouth a fast jab landed square in the center of her stomach, sinking in deeply, easily crushing her abs. OUFFF, she doubled over, wrapping her arms on the abdomen. Her ex smiled "You think that hurts, that's NOTHING compared to what I had to go through."
Linda raised her arms up asking for mercy, "No, wait, we can talk ab..OUGGH!!"
Another punch slammed into her mid-sentence, THUD, "OUGHHH" another, this time she fell to the floor, her knees giving out on her. She tried to curl up on the floor, gasping trying to fill her lungs with air. Her stomach felt like if someone had shot her it was hurting so bad.
Linda was starting to get dizzy due to lack of air, she was seeing double but still managed to start slowly getting to her feet. The images became doubles ahead her eyes. She finally managed to get to her feet when an uppercut crashed into her navel with such force it actually lifted her off her feet. She fell back into the ropes, vomiting, asking mercy. Her attacker's eyes became wide and he replied to her please by taunting "This is on the start whore, and its gonna get a whole lot worse."
Linda could barely stand, she was leaning on the ropes covering up her stomach with an hand, with the other was grabbing the ropes. She tried to reason with him, "We can start over, I know I made a mistake please, just stop hitting me. He moved towards the girl and grabbed her by her shoulder, looking straight into her eyes, "Please don't hit me, pleauuUUURRGGGH, OFFFF." Two fast jabs on to her solar plexus stopped her mid-sentence. She tried to double over but he just straightened her back up and with his hands on her shoulders drove two knees into to the pit of her stomach. "WOOOFFF, UNGHHH!!!" The last two knees drove what little air she still had in her lungs out and she collapsed to the ground unconscious.
He picked her up and brought her towards the ropes again. This time he trapped her arms under the top and 2nd ropes, making sure she wouldn't be going anywhere any time soon. A couple of minutes later another woman showed up at the gym; Dave's ex. She was a feisty Latina with short hair, and all curves. "Hi Joan" She smiled and replied, "Hi, so that's the little bitch that took my boy friend huh?" "Hmmmmmmm, what to do what to do," she whispered, running her hands across Linda's flat smooth belly before smacking Linda across the face. "No, don't hit the face, wouldn't wanna leave any marks" The girl smiled than ducked under the ropes and walked behind Linda grabbing both of her arms and leaning back, stretching her backwards, leaving Linda's stomach as stretched as possible.
Meanwhile John had gone to the sink and filled his water bottle with cold water. He jumped back into the ring and splashed it on Linda's face bringing her back around. He looked her in the eye for a couple of seconds before he let loose with a flurry of punches aimed at her midsection. One, two, three, four, five times. THUD, THUD THUD, THUD, THUD. For the first two punches Linda was able to flex her abs and absorb most of the punishment but by the time the last three punches slammed into her she was to weak to flex her abs and took them all full force. Two hard rights and a swooping left hook all sank DEEP into her, just above the navel.
Linda tried to double over, but with Joan pulling her arms back she couldn't. John gave her a second to catch her breath before restarting his assault. He grabbed her by the shoulders again, then slammed his left knee deep into her just under her breasts. SOCK, THUD "UNGHHH, OOFFF!!" The girl raised the head retching and coughing up blood. Another left right combination to her solar-plexus had Linda just about out when Joan and John switched places.
Joan jumped into the ring eager to exact revenge from the young blond that had stolen her man. John untangled Linda's arms from the ropes but she was too weak to do anything other than collapse to the floor. John grabbed her by the arms and flipped her unto her back, while Joan looked on. "Please......stop......I'll do any thing please......." Linda begged, but her please fell on deaf ears as Joan stomped her foot down into the pit of her stomach. "AAAAAAAUUUUUGHH!!!" was all Linda could say as Joan stomped on her again and again. Joan started to stomp on her stomach, first slowly, then with more strength. THUD, THUD. "OOFFF!!!!!!" Linda's legs were jerking off the ground from the force of the blows, while John held her arms down and Joan continued to stomp her into oblivion. Sometimes instead of stomping on her, Joan kicked Linda right on her ribs.
Finally the Joan said, "I think she's had enough John" John only nodded in reply. Joan looked at Linda then added, "What do you say to one more stomp? A little something for the road you could say?" Linda was in too much pain to understand what Joan was talking about, she just lay there to weak to move, blood bubbling out of the corner of her mouth. Joan climbed to the top of one of the corners then launched herself into the air, landing on Linda's stomach with a knee. WHOMPPP. "UUUUUUUURRRGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!"
Linda's whole body jerked up around the knee embedded deep in her stomach before falling back limply to the ground. The girl fell into unconsciousness , the pain too much to bear.'
Linda was a nice blonde girl, shoulder length hair, tiny stomach, sculpted abs and your average California girl. She left her boyfriend, John a professional boxer, for his best friend Dave because he was too jealous for her; or so she said.
For two weeks she didn't hear from the boy, when, suddenly, he called
her. "Come tomorrow in the gym at ten PM, I really need to talk to you." She decided on going ahead and meeting him but she didn't really like the idea of meeting him alone so late at night. To her their relationship was over, there was nothing to talk about.
She got to the gym around 9:45 PM, to find an old dirty boxing ring, in a gym that looked like it hadn't been used in years. Most of the lights were of so she walked to the far end of the gym and turned all the lights on so she could se more clearly. The place was empty.
Since her ex hadn't arrived yet she climbed through the ropes and started to launch fake jabs, dreaming of what it would be like to box for a living. She was dressed in a white, close-fitting shirt, and a short black mini. Her big breast
jumped with every blow. Suddenly, she heard a voice "You blonde bitch what do you think your doing?"
The ex-boyfriend had climbed into the ring while she was day dreaming, he stood at a corner of the ring with shorts and boxing-gloves on, ready for action.
He was a pretty big guy, tall and with big muscles. Linda saw him standing there and mocked, "isn't it a little late for a fight?" He laughed and replied "You don't understand bitch? The match is tonight and you're the main event."
Suddenly the girl understood, he was here to get revenge for what she had done, she tried to escape, ducking through the ropes but her grabbed her by the arm and pushed her to the center of the ring before she could get away.
She tried to say something but just as she opened her mouth a fast jab landed square in the center of her stomach, sinking in deeply, easily crushing her abs. OUFFF, she doubled over, wrapping her arms on the abdomen. Her ex smiled "You think that hurts, that's NOTHING compared to what I had to go through."
Linda raised her arms up asking for mercy, "No, wait, we can talk ab..OUGGH!!"
Another punch slammed into her mid-sentence, THUD, "OUGHHH" another, this time she fell to the floor, her knees giving out on her. She tried to curl up on the floor, gasping trying to fill her lungs with air. Her stomach felt like if someone had shot her it was hurting so bad.
Linda was starting to get dizzy due to lack of air, she was seeing double but still managed to start slowly getting to her feet. The images became doubles ahead her eyes. She finally managed to get to her feet when an uppercut crashed into her navel with such force it actually lifted her off her feet. She fell back into the ropes, vomiting, asking mercy. Her attacker's eyes became wide and he replied to her please by taunting "This is on the start whore, and its gonna get a whole lot worse."
Linda could barely stand, she was leaning on the ropes covering up her stomach with an hand, with the other was grabbing the ropes. She tried to reason with him, "We can start over, I know I made a mistake please, just stop hitting me. He moved towards the girl and grabbed her by her shoulder, looking straight into her eyes, "Please don't hit me, pleauuUUURRGGGH, OFFFF." Two fast jabs on to her solar plexus stopped her mid-sentence. She tried to double over but he just straightened her back up and with his hands on her shoulders drove two knees into to the pit of her stomach. "WOOOFFF, UNGHHH!!!" The last two knees drove what little air she still had in her lungs out and she collapsed to the ground unconscious.
He picked her up and brought her towards the ropes again. This time he trapped her arms under the top and 2nd ropes, making sure she wouldn't be going anywhere any time soon. A couple of minutes later another woman showed up at the gym; Dave's ex. She was a feisty Latina with short hair, and all curves. "Hi Joan" She smiled and replied, "Hi, so that's the little bitch that took my boy friend huh?" "Hmmmmmmm, what to do what to do," she whispered, running her hands across Linda's flat smooth belly before smacking Linda across the face. "No, don't hit the face, wouldn't wanna leave any marks" The girl smiled than ducked under the ropes and walked behind Linda grabbing both of her arms and leaning back, stretching her backwards, leaving Linda's stomach as stretched as possible.
Meanwhile John had gone to the sink and filled his water bottle with cold water. He jumped back into the ring and splashed it on Linda's face bringing her back around. He looked her in the eye for a couple of seconds before he let loose with a flurry of punches aimed at her midsection. One, two, three, four, five times. THUD, THUD THUD, THUD, THUD. For the first two punches Linda was able to flex her abs and absorb most of the punishment but by the time the last three punches slammed into her she was to weak to flex her abs and took them all full force. Two hard rights and a swooping left hook all sank DEEP into her, just above the navel.
Linda tried to double over, but with Joan pulling her arms back she couldn't. John gave her a second to catch her breath before restarting his assault. He grabbed her by the shoulders again, then slammed his left knee deep into her just under her breasts. SOCK, THUD "UNGHHH, OOFFF!!" The girl raised the head retching and coughing up blood. Another left right combination to her solar-plexus had Linda just about out when Joan and John switched places.
Joan jumped into the ring eager to exact revenge from the young blond that had stolen her man. John untangled Linda's arms from the ropes but she was too weak to do anything other than collapse to the floor. John grabbed her by the arms and flipped her unto her back, while Joan looked on. "Please......stop......I'll do any thing please......." Linda begged, but her please fell on deaf ears as Joan stomped her foot down into the pit of her stomach. "AAAAAAAUUUUUGHH!!!" was all Linda could say as Joan stomped on her again and again. Joan started to stomp on her stomach, first slowly, then with more strength. THUD, THUD. "OOFFF!!!!!!" Linda's legs were jerking off the ground from the force of the blows, while John held her arms down and Joan continued to stomp her into oblivion. Sometimes instead of stomping on her, Joan kicked Linda right on her ribs.
Finally the Joan said, "I think she's had enough John" John only nodded in reply. Joan looked at Linda then added, "What do you say to one more stomp? A little something for the road you could say?" Linda was in too much pain to understand what Joan was talking about, she just lay there to weak to move, blood bubbling out of the corner of her mouth. Joan climbed to the top of one of the corners then launched herself into the air, landing on Linda's stomach with a knee. WHOMPPP. "UUUUUUUURRRGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!"
Linda's whole body jerked up around the knee embedded deep in her stomach before falling back limply to the ground. The girl fell into unconsciousness , the pain too much to bear.'